Kyuuketsuki

Please, I'd like some good reviews. Heheh.. it was kind of random, so I don't expect it to be very good. I wanted to get opinions on it, though. Everything's ...

Sooo... here's the first chapter to a novel I'm starting. I'm really hoping for some critical reviews. By the way... the title will make more sense later on. ------ My ...

Ummm... yeahhh... randomness... There's a certain person I want to guess about it... A burning rose Hidden by a shield Only a shadow seen by outsiders A smile A laugh ...