KyrianAstaAzaray

Thank you! It was a bit shorter than I meant, and I think you were the one to point that out. So I added the rest of the page. Even ...

I did mean through, thanks! And mist was intentional. I'll fix the comma as well. Thank you so much for the review!

Wow, this is incredible. I've always loved this setting. Poor, dingy. It's always drawn my attention. And the way you describe it puts me into that time. I could feel ...

I love it. It shows a personal story, without it being personal, if that makes sense. One i can connect with without having to think about it. The words give ...

I really loved your poem! It brings me to a place where i can understand and relate. At the same time it shows a foreignness that i never knew. It's ...

Hi ^^ thanks so much for your review. I did change the orphanage situation. A Gorgon is a notoriously ugly mythical creature. Usually known for being so ugly they turn ...

Thanks so much, your review really helped. For some reason, the entire time I was writing this, I felt like i was missing something. I've made the changes you pointed ...