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Re: The Whispering of Seeds
Tragic! This is really good. I love the entire concept of the balloons in there. I think you really struck gold with all of the vivid imagery and anecdotes. Also ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: What is
This is awesome! If Socrates wrote poetry, he'd have written something like this. Nothing like questioning everything :) Keep it up!
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Wicked the Musical
Some of the best music ever written!
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Time Tunnel
That's dope! I love how it switches between different events and thoughts - kind of reminded me of a few parts in Brave New World by Aldous Huxley. Also, great ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Stacy's Mom
This got my attention for sure! I'm dying to know more about Paradise, and the sudden change in perspective pulled me in even further. I'll be watching for more of ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Peeled Naked
That was sassy! Consider me a fan. The line breaks and impressive flow really helped with the mental imagery! The only thing that could be improved would be for the ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Don't Care
I like it! This poem really puts a mental image of the situation into my mind, and you put it simply, making it very easy to relate to. I can ...
Jul 2, 2011