KyleTheGreat13

This is awesome! You found a message that proves so meaningful for so many people. That is what great writing does! Your descriptions are absolutely great, and you used the ...

Snap crackle POP! That was some saucy stuff right there, bro. I liked this a lot. I think we've all been in this situation before, making it easily relatable. I ...

Deep stuff! If I interpreted the meaning correctly, I agree that sometimes change can be overwhelming in every way. I really like your work here, because I think it's something ...

I like this! Although I'll admit I don't entirely understand the message, this poem still proves to be quite thought-provoking. I feel a lot of reversal going on, providing a ...

Overall, this is very well-written. A few thoughts: The first paragraph could be made a lot stronger with some better word choice to describe John. I love that he was ...

I'm a fan! The first paragraph as a whole was a tad shaky, but the rest was real solid. Cordvac seems like an interesting character, and I'd love to know ...

Very good! If you hadn't said you were new at this topic, I would have easily thought otherwise. It flows very well, which may be one of the best aspects ...

This is really interesting! You caught my attention quickly and I'm excited for future installments! The only critique I have to offer is that while most of it is spot-on, ...

Nice. I like how straightforward and to the point this is! I found it interesting that you dropped the rhyme scheme in the final stanza - whether it was intended ...

I love this! I think we've all been there at one point or another in life, and you really knocked it out of the park! You developed the message very ...