Kylan

Entry Critique: I've always liked the word carnage. :wink: Anyway, as a piece of flash fiction, this was good. It has a rolling, poetic format to it that not many ...

Entry Critique: I enjoyed this piece. It has some good imagery, beautful expressions, and solid syntax. On the whole, nice job. I only have a few problems here. First off, ...

Crit for entering the "On Fire" contest: Despite, it's bluntness and rhyming scheme, I really liked this piece. You know poetry's good when the last line sends something electric down ...

“Your turn.” I handed the controller reluctantly to my idle friend. He was still grinning from my mediocre game. “What! You got something to say,” I retorted . He just ...

Incredible, Sam dear. I wish there was more. I wish there were pages and pages and pages more of these delicious words. Teach me. Teach me everything you know. Please? ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a long and happy career in the forums here. Secondly, let me give you a word of advice. Never post ...

Crit of Chapter One only: As usual, my dear, a delicious read. I adore your dialogue. It flows, it moves, it's funny, it's informative, and what's more it left me ...

That was pretty good. You definately have some solid potential and I found myself wanting more. I think your shining characteristic is your knack for description. So keep up the ...

Brilliant, Cal! I shall love it forever. -Kylan (PS: Love your choice of music for all :wink: ) EDIT: The zip for side two doesn't work. When I access mediafire, ...

First, I gotta tell you that I loved this. Your style is so tight and entertaining and believable. It provided a quick, powerful, immediate insight into the true personality of ...

I really enjoyed this. I'm only just discovering plays and scripts (and thinking of writing one myself) and this piece struck me as smooth flowing and well thought out. At ...

Well, you had me curious. I can't say much for the plot or the way you delivered it, but I sincerely wanted to know what was inside. Kudos for that. ...

Well, I think the last chapter was better for some reason. Probably because I'm not as fond of the starwars-esque nature of this second installment and since my Sci-Fi interests ...

I enjoyed this. You definately have a distinct, practiced style of writing that's very entertaining to read. I almost wanted to say something negetive about the poetic nature of this ...

First of all, ask yourself: is what I'm writing fantasy? If so, please post in the fantasy fiction forum. Please don't make the A/A forum a dumping ground for general ...