Kyaira

This is a nice poem. It kept me wondering what exactly happened or is happening to the character. It spoke truly of how long it can take for the trials ...

I agree with a few others that there seems to be forced rhyming and an awkward amount of syllables at times. However, there was the perfect amount of detail in ...

This is so true. I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. The rhyming certainly allowed the poem to flow nicely. I'd change the title of the piece to perhaps a ...

I enjoyed the choppy aspect of this poem. It kept the poem up to beat and "matter-of-fact". It doesn't seem to tell the story of a girl that got dumped, ...

Love this. I think the repetitive aspect of this song is appropriate. I heard this song as played by an acoustic guitar with a gentle voice accompanying it, and it ...

I like this poem. It flowed and rhymed nicely, even if the scheme was slightly flawed. I liked how you portrayed the speaker to being superior to the one they ...