Kwantack

Thank you all for comments! I've had many requests to make a second one, so...we'll see what happens.

Great imagery with this! I loved it! Maybe try captalizing each line I gave you my trust and like shattered glass you broke it. Great simile here!! I whispered you ...

I, too, can't really find anything wrong with this. It was beautifully done. I love how it was inspired by a song. I try to do that sometimes, but it ...

First of all, I loved the title for this. This poem has a sad yet deep meaning to it. You did a wonderful job with it. Very well writ. The ...

Gertrude Stein eats lemon curry. XD No comment on this, really. I don't know why I liked it, nor why I'm replying to it.

Wow!! I loved this! Imagery was great, and this has a very strong emotion to it. I loooove the title. It's perfect. I think the length is good and it ...

This is very interesting...the flow is very unique too. You use a lot of commas...I'm not sure if that's good or bad or what. This has potential...but it could use ...

Enstrangement is an awesome title. Just saying. The other person did a good job with correcting stuff. I enjoyed reading your poem. It's very intersting and I think you did ...

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I loved it!

This was great! The length is good too, I agree. I think your flow is amazing and the rhyming is good. Also, vocabulary was fantastic. Keep writing!

This is fantastic! Vocabulary is amazing, flow is great, and the grammar is wonderful. Also, the rhyming was very well done. Overall I loved this! Keep writing!!!

Wow! I love this too! Like you said, the concept is really good and I think you wrote this very well. There's not much else for me to say except ...

Perfect. Simply perfect. I feel quite at ease that I am not the only one who believes this. Well done!!!

To clear up any confusion whatsoever: Yes, I realize I'm only continuing the process but if it will stop the whole problem all together then it's worth the ridicule and ...

This is both very well written and very true. You're writing style is really good. Keep up the good work!