Ktg17

Hello! I really liked this, it was sweet and romantic, and I definitely want to read more, but I did notice one thing. Have you ever read the book Dear ...

Wow! I really love this! It really pulled on my heartstrings!!! :D I only noticed one thing: you called Seth's mom "Mary", and then it was "Marry", but this was ...

Hey Hero~ Like I told you before, I really love this. It's really sweet, and it gets right at your heart. :D “I need you, Elle, like the water needs ...

OK, there are A LOT OF GRAMMAR ERRORS HERE!!!!!! GO through and fix them, and then I'll tell you how the story is. I don't mean to be rude, I'm ...

Hi I'm Ktg17 and I'll be reviewing today. There were a few grammar errors, but not many. I won't list them because I'm sure other reviewers already have!!! :D. For ...

Hi my name is Ktg17 and I will be reviewing for you today!! :D I love this! It is so creative, and it flows so well. I didn't find lots ...

:D I love this! I didn't find any grammar errors, so that's good!! I love the storyline here! It's creative and great!!! The first paragraph captivated me! :D

This is a great piece of writing! I love it and want to read more! There is so much detail! I did notice a small punctuation problem, but I'm sure ...

I love this! Although I have to agree with the two other reviewers. Those two parts they mentioned were confusing to me and I assume many others as well. Overall, ...

I REALLY like this! You've got definite talent!!! It's so true!!! But is this a girl singing it to a guy? I was wondering. :D :D :D :D

This is a great piece of writing. It's very possible and close to home. I like how you developed your characters. Lots of great details. This is a thumbs up. ...

OK I think you should show more detail instead of telling us. like instead of saying " She has brown hair" you could say " Brown hair frames her pretty ...