Krystalstars

OMG! YES! Edward is so cool!

Okay. It was....alright. Could be improved though. Spelling errors for one, and paragraphs are a good thing, trust me on this. ^_^ Oh, and double space your para's like I ...

I shall!

That's good! I love it!

That was awesome! I can't speak for grammar as I suck at it but I do have one tip. Don't say her name so much! Other than that it rox!

UPDATE: So far it's going awesome, about 4 pages! Not including proluge

UPDATE: I will be possting the prolouge soon! Only one name has changed, jAzz is now jEzz....

Harry Potter all the way! 7th book in july! *Whooooooooooooop!*

UPDATE: I have just updated this poem big time....hopefully it's better. I tried my hardest as I really love this one. I removed one of the corus lines and added ...

Krystalstars, You're showing very little, if any, progress with your writing. You continue to rely on gimmicks. As an example, the short lines in S4 don't merit the attention you ...

A little too blatantly religious for me, but then again I'm an aetheist, so what do I know. Still, religious poems have a tendency to say the same thing - ...

Very romantic, but what does this mean?: She hides under her Emo face Her sadness, as Emo usaly means depressed. I didn't know that! It's true what they say, you ...

that was cool, a little depressing but most serious good poems r either good or depressing, and i have just one question what kind of book did she find? The ...

Very romantic, but what does this mean?: She hides under her Emo face Her sadness, as Emo usaly means depressed.

That was truly beautyful! I love the it ok if I post it on my website? All creadit to you!