KrazyKaitlin

I believe everyone can Have an opinion on the matter. I used to be idealistic and what's called a romantic But that was before. The opening was awkward, I agree, ...

At the moon in it's place I'd just like to point out that you used the wrong 'it's'. "it's" is used only for "it is", and "its" is used for ...

I really liked this poem. Just a few little things - (sorry, I'm a perfectionist!) - A couple of the similes are already used a lot. Don't get me wrong, ...

Nice poem! :) Just a few things I think could be improved.. Too long (Capital L?) Too long have we been controlled by the eyes in the sky (This line ...

Well done - this is a really good poem! Normally I'm not a real fan of non-rhyming poetry, but this poem is different. I loved the ending - it sort ...

I love the descriptions in this...especially your use of similes and adjectives. One thing I'd like to point out, though, is that you started of in past tense, then switched ...

Pretty cool. I think you need to put in an adjective describing the angel, just for rythmic purposes, in the next to last line. You need some sort of filler ...