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Re: As time flies by
Hellllloooo!!!! First off I love this work as i can relate. Todays Education system is biased and demotivating in many ways, and i feel this poem words that thought perfectly. ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Failure and Success
Heyoooo! Noob reviewer here. First off, very motivational message. Very inspiring. Now some critice Lines 3 and 4 could have been just one line too increase the flow. After every ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: A Town Most Dreary
New to leaving reviews so heads up 1. The second line feels out of place; your poem has an easy flow of words but the word "poignet" disrupts the flow. ...
Mar 28, 2019