KookieKatie

Uhh.. what? No, this isn't a poem. It's telling someone off with line breaks. Sorry. Try again. -KK

That was great!! I loved the way that you used metephors and extensive word choice. An excellent piece - keep writing!

This is just a monologue with line breaks. I can see why you named it the way you did.

I personally think the opening was great - very vauge until it catches on. The idea of the popular girl's secrets is great!! I loved it. I would have liked ...

I thought that it was amazing!! I would have liked to see a little less vaugeness, but still really amazing and very emotional. I love it.

I am sorry, but I do NOT like this poem.. It doesn't rhyme well, the rhythm is off, and it's just kinda stupid. It needs a lot of work, that's ...

Not bad, but strange. I think that it was very choppy and vague. The stanzas were different lengths and not at all in the same format, although that's not always ...

Some of the rhythm didn't seem to make sense, but it was still really good. Maybe it was just way different in my head then it was in actuality, but ...