Konijn

Thank you so much! My main character (who is my younger self haha) IS around 6-7ish at the time this took place, and you will get to see a lot ...

Thank you so much for the review! I really like how you worded the first paragraph, and I hope you don't mind if I change it. I do intend to ...

Oh my gosh! This is absolutely GORGEOUS!

WOW! This is a really good review, and I'm actually kind of glad you went off on a tangent because it really helps me to see what I need to ...

Hello demurepoet! Yes, you are not the only one who has gone through these terrible things. I have fallen prey once before to a particular persons lies and had to ...

Thanks for the review! Yes, the rhyme scheme was almost lost. I'm not really sure what I was thinking to be honest. It WAS 2am, so I was probably half ...

Tigerlilly here once again! I like some of the changes you made, it definitely works well. The poem is very consistent with patterns and such, which makes it very nice ...

I would love to reread it if you do. It's a really beautiful poem.

Thank you!

Thank you for the review! I will keep these things in mind when reading/editing it.

Thank you so much for the help! I feel like its hard to write about something that I had only a limited amount of information on, especially considering its a ...

Okay!

Thanks for the review! I will go back and edit, and I'm really glad you pointed these things out to me. The sexual orientation bit was actually what my friends ...

Yay! I have interpreting skills! I really liked this and I hope to read more of your works in the future. Have a nice day!

Thanks for the excellent review! I think you are right about the punctuation, and I may go back to add it. Have a nice day! :)