Koitsubaki

Thanks Mea! And sorry for the late reply, I've been kind of busy outside of writing owo I'll keep what you send in mind when I write the next version ...

Thanks LukeStarkiller! I was so nervous that I overdid the story way too much to be appreciated. I'll consider everything you said and I'll correct all my typos right away. ...

Thanks LukeStarkiller! I was so nervous that I overdid the story way too much to be appreciated. I'll consider everything you said and I'll correct all my typos right away. ...

Thanks LukeStarkiller! I was so nervous that I overdid the story way too much to be appreciated. I'll consider everything you said and I'll correct all my typos right away. ...

Hey Snickerdoodle! Perhaps you could appreciate this story in a different lens if I tell you that I didn't make this girl up from the ground up. It's just Monika.

Hey Snickerdoodle! Perhaps you could appreciate this story in a different lens if I tell you that I didn't make this girl up from the ground up. It's just Monika.

Thanks Carina! Maybe I'll type up a better response to this in the future since I'm beat, but I'll let you in on a secret: The main girl in the ...

That's so cool! Now I have more respect for you umu After your contest though, can I have your blessing in taking the main premise of the story and create ...

Thanks for your review! I'm considering everything you said. I have a few clarifications though. What do you mean by changing a lot of the wording so it "makes sense" ...

Thanks for your review! I'm considering everything you said. I have a few clarifications though. What do you mean by changing a lot of the wording so it "makes sense" ...

Thanks for your review! I'm considering everything you said. I have a few clarifications though. What do you mean by changing a lot of the wording so it "makes sense" ...

Thanks for your review! I'm considering everything you said. I have a few clarifications though. What do you mean by changing a lot of the wording so it "makes sense" ...

%u3084%u3063%u305F%u30FC! Thanks for that! owo

Hi soundofmind! I've a quick review for you. I'm not really a poetry person, and I'm a newbie to this site, so I apologize ahead if my review isn't as ...

Thanks for the review! :3