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KocoCoko

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: 3. The Patients.

    My friend made the artwork of Joan and Quinzel, and gave me full permission to post it here :D I thought I'd include it since my friend was really proud ...

    Jan 7, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flightless: Chapter 4

    A flower? Hm... only thing I can think of is Calla Lily or Calycanthus

    Apr 8, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flightless: Chapter 3

    If you want some extra details about the NC rural towns: terrible humidity, never consistent whether (it was 70 yesterday, 40 tomorrow) and red ants EVERYWHERE. Those hills can grow ...

    Mar 25, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Village Girl. Chapter 1 of The Apothecaries

    Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate the feedback :)

    Mar 25, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: Chicken Noodle Soup

    Hiya! Koco (or Coko) here for an informal review! Just going to comment on stuff I liked and noticed throughout the chapter, plus general vibes and such. With all that ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 2

    Thanks for writing a review! I do definitely struggle with describing scenery sometimes, I do admit. Actually, the entire reason I'm writing this is so I can sort of force ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 2

    Thank you for commenting! I really appreciate the thought put into this! Some of this advice I really needed. Oh! But to help make sense of the setting better (the ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Writing Like I'm Running Out of Time

    Hiya! It's Koco (or Coko) here for a simple review! First thing I noticed- I see someone here is a Hamilton fan. Haha, don't worry. I haven't listened in years ...

    May 27, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Beauty in the Macabre

    Don't worry! Names and all that have been changed to not actual locations :) (if they are I'm so sorry)

    Feb 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Crimson night

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    What a tragic tale. Bravo! It's nice to see that his true form was never truly revealed. It adds a nice layer of mystery and a good use of imagination ...

    Feb 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Vamp (Chapter Three)

    Feb 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Historical Fiction Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 2.

    Hiya again! Thanks so much for keeping up with the story, it means the world to me. All I'll say about the new characters is to keep an eye on ...

    Feb 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Historical Fiction Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 1.

    Hiya! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter and the character dynamics!

    Feb 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Historical Fiction Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 1.

    Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate all the feedback (sorry for such a late response, as well!) Hopefully the grammar wasn't too noticable, or too damaging to ...

    Feb 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Wetfire-chapter one

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    Feb 6, 2023


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