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Re: 3. The Patients.
My friend made the artwork of Joan and Quinzel, and gave me full permission to post it here :D I thought I'd include it since my friend was really proud ...
Jan 7, 2025 -
Re: Flightless: Chapter 4
A flower? Hm... only thing I can think of is Calla Lily or Calycanthus
Apr 8, 2024 -
Re: Flightless: Chapter 3
If you want some extra details about the NC rural towns: terrible humidity, never consistent whether (it was 70 yesterday, 40 tomorrow) and red ants EVERYWHERE. Those hills can grow ...
Mar 25, 2024 -
Re: The Village Girl. Chapter 1 of The Apothecaries
Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate the feedback :)
Mar 25, 2024 -
Re: Chicken Noodle Soup
Hiya! Koco (or Coko) here for an informal review! Just going to comment on stuff I liked and noticed throughout the chapter, plus general vibes and such. With all that ...
Sep 4, 2023 -
Re: Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 2
Thanks for writing a review! I do definitely struggle with describing scenery sometimes, I do admit. Actually, the entire reason I'm writing this is so I can sort of force ...
Jun 8, 2023 -
Re: Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 2
Thank you for commenting! I really appreciate the thought put into this! Some of this advice I really needed. Oh! But to help make sense of the setting better (the ...
Jun 8, 2023 -
Re: Writing Like I'm Running Out of Time
Hiya! It's Koco (or Coko) here for a simple review! First thing I noticed- I see someone here is a Hamilton fan. Haha, don't worry. I haven't listened in years ...
May 27, 2023 -
Re: Beauty in the Macabre
Don't worry! Names and all that have been changed to not actual locations :) (if they are I'm so sorry)
Feb 22, 2023 -
Re: Crimson night
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Feb 19, 2023
What a tragic tale. Bravo! It's nice to see that his true form was never truly revealed. It adds a nice layer of mystery and a good use of imagination ... - Re: The Vamp (Chapter Three) Feb 13, 2023
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Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 2.
Hiya again! Thanks so much for keeping up with the story, it means the world to me. All I'll say about the new characters is to keep an eye on ...
Feb 11, 2023 -
Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 1.
Hiya! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter and the character dynamics!
Feb 10, 2023 -
Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 1.
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate all the feedback (sorry for such a late response, as well!) Hopefully the grammar wasn't too noticable, or too damaging to ...
Feb 10, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire-chapter one
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