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(This is a crude review written in the moment, so it's mostly about the emotions felt throughout reading and first impression.) So, it took me a while to come up ...

Oh, I really like this! It's a nice starting point for a story. I definitely think that the very first paragraph is the strongest. The descriptions and the emotions are ...

This chapter was so fun! It was nice to see some new faces and find out about the other students. It's a bit disappointing that there's already a bully, but ...

Wow, this piece hurts, even if it's not exactly aimed for me. As daughter to a single dad, I feel like this works for any gender. How much a parent ...

What a tragic tale. Bravo! It's nice to see that his true form was never truly revealed. It adds a nice layer of mystery and a good use of imagination ...

Hiya! Here for another review! So, to start off, I wasn't expecting a school-tale (which I'm usually very weary about), but I think this is executed pretty well for an ...

I'm so happy to see chapter four! As well as excited!! Honestly, I'm still loving Albert. Such an honest and relatable character. No shame for cheeseburgers at seven am, either. ...

Wow, I am completely stunned. Just came from chapters one and two, and this is turning out to be such a compelling story! I have a feeling this isn't the ...

Hi! Just here to do a small little review. Wow, I was taken aback by this. From the first line I was completely memorized. The rage, the confusion, the noise ...

Hiya! Here to just review and comment a little on this chapter. Although a simple one, this is probably my favorite (tied with the first) so far! Albert is turning ...

Oooh I just really loved this! The nightmare sequence is such a good opening. The simplicity of it is haunting as well, and leaves lots to the imagination, which is ...

Here to review! Fair warning, fantasy stories and that sort are completely out of my usual comfort zone, so if this review gets some things wrong or doesn't understand, do ...

Interesting take on the end of the world! I love the characters, their history, and their development both separated and together. I will say that I think the grammar is ...