KnightlyAngel09

Hello.:) I think it's a good effort to write something positive for a change. I've noticed that a lot of poems in the site have been taking a darker turn. ...

Hey! Scholarship essays, nice! First of all, I really wish you luck. Since I think the reviewer above tackled a lot of the fine points of your essay, I think ...

Hello! Cool! From a dream? That's awesome. My dreams are alarmingly incoherent and un-poetic. I had a dream once that my toilet bowl swallowed me. I have yet to write ...

Hello.:) I'd like to see what a boy would say about this. Haha. I can imagine them reading this and going 'huh'? I think it's absolutely wonderful that you're writing ...

Hello.:) I think what this really needs something more tangible. You had a lot of attempt at imagery in the poem like being stuck, charcoal, chains-- something I suppose that ...

Hey july4ruby!:) I think this is a topic which a lot of young people will be able to relate to. It's a painful topic, of course, and probably one that ...

Hello, hello. I love this. This reminded me so much of my philosophy classes. I had an urge to answer all of the questions posed in this poem with Heidegger ...

Hey Amberchelli!:) I kind of like this poem, although I think it needs some more work. The end of a relationship is a common subject of poetry and it has ...

Hello.:) I'm Nixie! Hopefully, I can be of some help. I think that most of the points was covered by the first reviewer, but I'll see if I can say ...

Hello! First of all, I really like this. I think your use of an extended metaphor worked really well for you. There was such an understated sense of sadness in ...

Hey! I think this poem was okay. It wasn't anything brilliant but you had a few good points. Your rhyme scheme was really good and kept consistent throughout the whole ...

Hello. This is a really good piece. I think it's a different take on cancer, and a very brave one. I think the sentiment in this poem is one a ...

Hello. I think you should always be hot for grammar. Teardrop there could have used her time reviewing the substance of this poem rather than grammar and form if you ...

Hello. Welcome to the site.:) I hope you enjoy it here. I shall try to review your poem, I apologize if I sound harsh at some points but we're all ...

Hello. Well, I honestly remember feeling like this as well, once upon a time. Honestly, it's a little unsettling how easy it is to relate to this. But I guess, ...