KnightTeen

And hilarious.

Why don't we get together sometime and write a Disney women thing? Heck, we could even analyze the Princes. That would be fun.

I seriously am like, totally bawling over this. I wish I could say more, but there is nothing that I can possibly say that hasn't already been said. Wow. Good ...

Don't worry, not creepy! Considerate, more like.

Seriously though, when is she gonna learn? lol

I kind of imagined her in shock or something, I guess, but I do see your point about her being clueless. It was obvious to everyone but her. I kind ...

Thanks so much for the review. I have to admit, this part gave me some trouble. I wrote it in an hour, and while I think I did pretty good ...

You've totally got this stuck in my head now. BUT IT'S AWESOME!

I see what you meant on the first one, but let me clarify the last two. It's meant to feel choppy in the first three lines because the narrator is ...

Tell that to my awesome boots and Harry Potter sweater!

No offense to the other reviewers, I respect their opinion and their right to have it and speak it, but thank you so much for getting that this was my ...

No. I am the supreme ruler of this universe and I decide when you get to know what you know. And you only get to know it when I think ...

You'll just have to find out now, won't you? tee hee.

Your next to last comment, "She isn't superpowerful" will be contested in the future. Just saying. Thanks!

She talked to James because 1) He owned the shop 2) He's her friend 3) I wanted to show how she interacts with others besides her parents and the team ...