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The Knight of Teens

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Muslim's Fate PART 18

    I can honestly say that once I run out of Sheridan Holmes, I don't know what I'll do with myself. You made me an addict, gave me an overdose and ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 17

    I have twelve more reviews that I want to do tonight. Maybe twenty-four if I really work hard. Here goes nothing. "I remembered." she told him. Typically when you say, ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 16

    Don't worry, I will stop stalking you in about an hour. I still have three more chapters after this one. Irem asked, unsure of if he should be messing with ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 15

    I love Review Day. More incentive to earn points. My team is currently in the lead. Go Rouges! Sheri gave Eli ten minutes to pack. Explaining that . In Myka's ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 14

    "Mother." Sheri said cracking her elbows By simply saying "Mother," you are somewhat implying that Eli and Sheri are sisters. That is not the case, and it's giving me figurative ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 13

    I'm kind of sad that this the end of Cold Case . It's been a good ride. But I am more excited about the next segment. Keep it up! She ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 12

    Hey, thanks for the link. Yes, I know that I am reviewing this right before review day starts, but I don't really care. There were actually very few things to ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Amethyst Night and the Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 9

    I'm baaccckkkk! Did you miss me? When I woke up the next morning, Fey’s bed lay empty next to me. This sentence is good, it just needs a little transition. ...

    Sep 25, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: I am

    First off, I would say that this is general poetry, maybe dramatic, or possibly realistic, but it definitely feels like poetry to me. Secondly, you did a very good job. ...

    Sep 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Wanderlust

    Thanks for submitting this to the KOTGR library. In case you didn't get it, this is one of the three (at minimum) reviews you will receive. This was absolutlely amazing. ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Two "Super Freaks"

    I read act one, and enjoyed it so when I saw this still in the GR I thought I'd tackle it. Fair warning, I haven't reviewed in a while. Just ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 8

    Hello again. You are my first review after getting back from vacation. I'm glad you wrote more Amethyst Knight. She, and Sheridan Holmes are the two books on here that ...

    Sep 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: [deleted]

    Here's one of the reviews that you will receive from a Knight of the Green Room. Your content is really good, and I only have three pieces of advices to ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Sadness & Goodbye

    Don't put yourself down, you are a good poet. Not as good as the Masters, but we can all here on YWS only ever dream to be like them someday. ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A small scenery on earth.

    This was really good, your imagery is amazing. I also liked everything that you had in this, the frogs, the locusts, the rain, etc. You sort of just threw all ...

    Sep 14, 2013


It takes as much imagination to create debt as to create income.
— Leandro Orr