Kiwisatsuma

Hey! Welcome to YWS! :D I really like the way you set up the dramatic reveal at the end of this story, especially Emmy's dread as she opens the letter ...

Hi! :) Ok, so I haven't reviewed anything for months and I might be kind of out of practice, but I found this story interesting so I'm having a go. ...

Hi! :) So, I read skimmed over the other version of this chapter, and I definitely prefer this one a lot. The spacing makes it easier to read, the pacing ...

Hi! Thanks for reading my story! :) So, I like this so far. I like the way the MC's personality comes through in so few paragraphs. Still, I do think ...

Hi! :) I liked this a lot. I like how familiar the tone of the letter sounds and how the narrator sounds so tender and affectionate but at the same ...

Hi! :D I really liked this. I love how creepy it got at the end, and how you hinted at what was to come with the bugs. That idea of ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! :D This is a really interesting start to the story. I love the idea of her going in the water and coming out dry, and there ...

Hi! :) This review is incredibly late. Sorry for being so rubbish at getting round to it. But anyway! I love the bit with the Masquerader being vunerable, and Rostoloff ...

Hi there! :) This story seems really interesting so far. I like how you had a mix of worldbuilding and describing the setting and setting up the plot, and the ...

Hi again, Day! :D Aargh, I had a review for this about a third typed out and then the internet went and closed down, so, here we go again. XD ...

Hi! :) I really like this. I'm totally jealous of your kiss writing skills. XD I love the tension between Ophelia and her boyfriend's family, and this is already really ...

Hi! :) I really like the way premise of this, and bringing in a descendant of Voldemort to be a student of Hogwarts is a great idea for Harry Potter ...

Hi! :) So... this review is ridiculously late. I'm really sorry it took so long. I've been a fairly absent YWSer recently, but review day finally pushed me into getting ...

Hi! :) I really like this. The description is really vivid and I love the way you described the setting so well without the story dragging. Also, I like the ...

Hi again! :) Sorry it took me so long to get round to commenting on this! Partly it's down to me procrastinating, and partly it's down to me really not ...