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Re: Drugs
Well I'll say this is one of the darker poem's I've read so far, I can say at most it's ok. I guess but I believe there could be more ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Scream
This was fairly good it reminded me of goosebumps a bit, but still fairly good in its own way. I could say you cn turn this into a story, maybe ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1
I've really never taken an intreast in a murder mystery so this will be my first review on one so I must apologize if my review seems, unbalenced. But I ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Eagle Talon Files chapter two
This is generally great, I do believe if you think about it enough you can make the chapter's longer. Take time between each one and try to think of how ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Lycanthropy
This is fairly good I'm personally not a fan of thw whole "werewolf fighting" concept but this story was decent, at most. I say you could have added physical description's ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: No-Win Scenarios (Unspoken Words)
This I must say really makes me think your being bullied everyday, I'm not saying that you are but what you write here makes me think that you are and ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The Ranger's Battle (prologue)
This is a good start there was no spelling mistakes for what I saw and plenty of dialoge which is good. maybe for the real start you could give a ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Dormant A Wings Novel
This is a great start to a nice long story book, there are things tho that you do need to fix, like some grammical mistakes plus some rewording can do ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: TITLE COMING SOON - Chapter 1 Part 2!
This is great some fixes here and there and its good I like it. I normally don't read about vampires but this is fairly great. unlike twilight we have the ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One: Rewrite
This is really great I honestly can't find anything wrong with this story, the character's are great starting out here. And I would love to read more and hopefully see ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: No Title Yet
This is a great story, I really like what you have here. it seems spontaniously chaging parts from demon wolves to sleeping in the outdoors to some gaint bird out ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Megaratha-Prologue
This is very good it's small but it's good enough to keep a person intreasted, I say you could have put in more like some dialoge or what cloths you ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
I read this all, front to back and side to side. you can smack a teenager hard with this and being one myself really makes me look this over and ...
May 5, 2011