KingKamor

Thank you both for your comments! I didn't think that this would fair well, but I guess that it did! XD @Tusker93: I've already planned out much of the story, ...

I liked all of the violence and such in LOTF, actually. I'm also into horror books and whatnot, so I liked how disturbing it was. I had to read it ...

I really liked how this was written. Not too much description, not too much inner thinking from the narrator. Just right. The piece itself also got me thinking a lot, ...

read first post for announcement, please.

Thanks for the comment. =)

Chapter 13 has been posted.

No, no! Thank you both for commenting! XD Tina, thanks for the longest critique I've ever gotten! Madame Cool, thank you for letting me see your avatar in one of ...

thanks for the comment, Tina! =D

Wowwowowowowowowow!! thats a totally awesome piece of writing. you've probably already heard that be4 but still! i wanna keep reading but i cant find ch. 6 or 7. where are ...

Chapter 11 is up. See first post for a link. =3

Yus! Critiqueness! =D It looks like the capitalization is done by foce of habit, because when I'm writing in a notebook, I don't write it like that. o.O; Not that ...

The rhythm needs some work, but it was nice and ansty. some of the words in the first stanza didn't feel right, so you may want to fix it. Good ...

This was really interesting, it caught my attention immediatly. I am curious to see what happens in the future. Will there be any sequels? Have you read the eigth chapters ...

@Jennafina: Okay, I changed the title. Hopefully that will stop some of the confusion. @sokool: Thanks for pointing those out. =3

A/N: Wow, I deeply apologise for the longlong wait for this chapter, but, well, here it is! Surprisingly enough, I finished about a quarter of it in the past half ...