Kim

Free writing? wow, this is great, the detail, everything, are you going to keep going with this story?, i think you should.

i enjoyed reading this, you are very good. the only part that confused me was the rest stop, with a lobby. i put myself at a bank. but everything else ...

I still love this, i never no where you are taking me as i read. awesome.

i loved the discription, i actually had the mental view of the land scape. i hope you post more on this, you are very good , cant find a single ...

thanks for your honest comments, the reason for the first two was because i had only posted the first few paragraphs to get feed back. i took their advice and ...

i really like the story, and the friendship between the two boys. the names had me confused tho, switching between real and the nick names. but you are good, keep ...

alot of meaning , in such a short space. i like it

i have yet to read anything of yours that i didnt like. i love your discriptions, and the emotion you put into your writing. kim

i enjoyed reading your story, i hope you finish it. if you add to this, could you let me know ? so i can continue reading. i think you are ...

wow, this really draws you in and makes one think. it can mean so many things to different people. it is great and i loved reading it, infact i went ...

As always, i love reading your work. It keeps me reading to the end, and waiting for more. so keep going will ya. :) Kim

I really liked this, from the beginning to the end. I am not good with poetry, but this seemed to flow easily. Great job. Kim

I thought it was pretty good, for just writing it on the spot. i liked it. it had the emotion but also showed a very stable person, you dont see ...

i really liked this, i am sure that anyone who reads your poem will in someway, connect with it. very well written. keep writing.

what a beautiful poem, it hit home with me, maybe because i just lost a friend, and this poem fits it perfectly. you are very good, dont stop writing.