Kilo

My nameless beauty, So polite so strong, Some wish her grief, I wish her love, I tell her to tell me her wish, Fore I shall grant it, She whispers ...

This was great, i like the use of diction and i really appreciate how you incorperated some powerful words into the more sorrowful parts of the poem, i really look ...

"She covers her eyes and avoids to see. She whispers his name in dreams in her sleep. She takes his hand and presses it to her cheek. She tells him ...

this is a really good peom :) i want to startr off telling you that this poem conveys some strong emotion,and that you really get across that you're upset about ...