Kikuyo

Ok, thank you darko.demark666 ! I don't get what you mean by not being able to have 2 verses as 2 stanzas? I guess I don't follow traditional guidelines when ...

Aww thank you! Yeah the last stanza is meant to sort of end the quatrain stanzas and give a final little... little what... hmm... a little last "pow"? Maybe not ...

Wow this is pretty scary/awesome. These would also make awesome lyrics. I'm sorry that I don't have a better critique at the moment; I really like your style and I ...

Well, I was expecting something strange and kind of creepy. I think you may have inspired me a little ^-^. What the heck is the 3rd phobia??? *googles*