KevybearsBunny

Hello Chipper, I had a really hard time following this story! :( I didn't understand, who were the two people arguing? Was it him and another person, or two other ...

Hello ah01871, :) First off I must say, I like what you have so far! Very suspenseful Good word choice. I would love to read more! There are a few ...

Hello :) First off, very good story! Very Imaginative! But there were quiet a few errors. Your story went to one thought to another. It was very hart to follow! ...

Hello Sam123, Very, well, interesting story. Kind of disturbing. Esspecially since the recent Sandy Hook shooting. (R.I.P to all the children and teachers that were lost that day.) First off, ...

Hello reason! :) For one I did enjoy reading this! I can only assume that i might know what this person is going through. I don't know if you purposly ...

Hey austynpotyok! :) For one, I loved reading this! I am a big fan of these type of stories! (Even if some of then keep me from sleeping at night) ...