Kevikur

Haha thank you for the comment. The piece was meant to be a visual representation of depression and hope. A literal representation. Thank you so much for reading. (:

Don't be upset; if you really wanted to you can go back and revise a bit to add in any details about the party. I think you did an amazing ...

Don't be! Everyone here is really nice and chill. We all try and give constructive criticism because we want to see people improve. I liked your chapter so don't give ...

I was going through a bout of time when I realized that people kill themselves by living a "fun" life. They go out and party, drink, have a ton of ...

You can hit unpublished when you go to edit. This happened to me too! I was only about four paragraphs into my story when I thought I saved it as ...

I would love to co-author something with you! We can talk over PM about your idea and see what we can work out.

This was only a draft and the finished product is in my portfolio, but thank you for reviewing anyways! I'm not sure if this thing is still open to be ...

Thank you so much for reading! I also love your avatar and your username. (-:

Thank you! Every author who writes about necrophila needs a cautious pat on the back.

The paragraph may be a bit awkward, I agree. I will try and find those errors soon; it's been long enough that hopefully they'll stick out like a sore thumb. ...

I would be more than happy to go through and take out the commas that I believe don't belong, then PM the edited story back to you. Just let me ...

That was perfectly horrible in all the right ways. My favorite line: then I took her by suprrise and leaned down and kissed her and she put her tongue into ...

Thank you tremendously!

Wow this was a wonderful review to read! Thank you so much! I had worried over this story quite a bit but my confidence in it has been really boosted. ...

I can't tell you how many times I've combed through this for errors, but they always evade me! In a day or two I'll reread and might be able to ...