Keowyn

how did it repel you? :cry: well, God be with you. if you were trying to hang on to Christianity. . . i can only advise you to find a ...

:) thanks for that. I did realize I should have capitalized and all, so I'll go edit it and see if you like it.

yeah, I never was the girl in my class who wrote the same 'roses are red' stuff. no, not really, I'm not 98. I'm 16.

ah. i see.

where did you get yaks from?

proably not. it was a school assignment to write a first chapter of a book. I MIGHT come back to it after my other story is finishedf

thanks, and the no particular order is as in lines- not words. the world would be a catastrophe if we talked like this: pizza it tastes with icky butter to ...

i'll have the rest this afternoon.

Kathrynne loved the sensation of wind flying in her hair. It tugged at her wet, stringy brown hair and flung it into cat green eyes. From her perch in the ...

i use two packets of pens a day most times, and it's annoying i admit because i'm left handed and it smudges all the ink .

well i have to say i use a pen alot at school, because i have two study halls and nothing to do!

hey, thanks! yes i was very tired, an as soon as possibly i'm going to redo those errors. i'm looking forward to writing this one.

thanks, i am new to typing and just finished the shcool calss so they are indeed typing typos. thanks again!

thanks you guys. Aha, but the scar plays a GREAT role in this. :twisted: and it sort of ties in with what happens later in the story. I did post ...

by all means it's fine, just as long as you DO rewrite it now. . .