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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Remember Her Hand Was Warm

    Hi. Here for a quick review. This piece is Interesting but next please try and make use of your punctuations properly. That being said. Reading this I was carried away, ...

    Feb 5, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lucid Dreamer

    Hey. Here for a quick review. Lucid dreaming is your chance to play around with the extraordinary abilities buried in unused parts of your brain. Regardless of whether your are ...

    Feb 5, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Music Loving Ghost

    Hey. Here for a quick review! Loneliness is a complex and usually unpleasant emotional response to isolation. Loneliness typically includes anxious feelings about a lack of connection or communication

    Feb 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Sickness

    Hi. Here for a quick review. This piece is Interesting. It really is. Loved the way you made use of your punctuations though. This piece of work talking about sickness. ...

    Feb 4, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That Night You Were On The Carpet/Are You Breathing?

    Hey. Here for a quick review. Nice piece there. It takes me back to the year I lost my mother. I love the structure here. Though this is a sad ...

    Feb 4, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: whisper

    This is great. Voice is amazing. The guitar, wow! I can relate this to someone seeking inner peace. Trying so hard to figure it out, I mean how to get ...

    Feb 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Take a look

    Wow. I was carried away reading this piece. The structure was good. How each line fits in perfectly to the next. I can relate it to "Love" love at first ...

    Feb 4, 2018


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