Kelpies

I took out the whole talking shark thing, it looks and feels more natural now. I needed to correct that. Though talking animals are sometimes fun, after a research paper ...

Thanks! I just did this for a contest, and it may not be my best quality piece, but I did my best with what I had without messing up the ...

Thanks, this is not my usual guild, so I tried my best. And I guess I do need to add in some more hunting. Thanks for the review though!

No problem. I'm on a review-mention typos-positive feedback spree.

Wonderful! I couldn't find any errors worth mentioning. I love all of it. How one person can get between you and another, manipulating you so that you leave someone and ...

Just read the other one, I'm still working on the review!

Partially true, partially true. Sort of steampunk, sort of just plain fantasy, it's all based on my dreams! You'll get it when the first chapter is out.

Ok guys! I am in the process of typing chapter one! It should be out within the week.

Thanks!

This certain paragraph is somewhere near the middle of the story. Thanks for the review by the way. And the love affair is just a garnish, even though it is ...

Yea, I'm pretty much always like that. Giving the reader minute details. But, when I've worked out all the kinks, the rest will go on here. Shall I post something ...

Thanks for the critique, and I am in the process of creating the rest of this novel. This is just a snippet, the rest will be published when I finish ...

Thanks! All the typos are because I'm on an iPad, except blare because I have no idea how to spell it. Thanks again!

Yea, I really need to work on that. I am almost half way through chapter one, just so you know. There are a lot of flaws in this part of ...

Thanks for the review! I'm just letting the story tell itself for the most part, I hate giving myself guidelines. I'm going to edit it when everything is done. But ...