Kelpies

Hello gelie24, This is a great poem, though a little disturbing (I love disturbing). It is wonderfully written, though there is no period at the end, though that doesn't matter. ...

Hello winndrattlestheblinds! This is a great piece, I may read the following chapters as they come out. It's really mysterious, what is this magic really? The passage of time is ...

Hello Linkzude16, This is really useful, I think I might add it to my favorites so that I can come back to it later. I often push in unexpected drama ...

Hello recreating, This poem is brilliant! I love the way it's written. I'm glad this wasn't from a personal experience, because this style of writing shouldn't be lost. This reminded ...

Hello Pinkieshere1345! I thought this was hilarious! Maybe you should make a club intending to make people laugh, I'll bet it would be a big hit. I just hope the ...

Hello Northstar! This is beautifully written, though it does have a few errors, most in capitalization. Just remember that all names start with a capital, and "I" is capitalized if ...

Hello skorlir! This flows beautifully! I'm not quite sure why you made steps though... It's very nice though. I could find no errors in this piece, good job. I like ...

Hello EmVeePi, This piece is pretty cool, kind of romantic, kind of skeptical. I like the way that you portrayed them. I found one spelling error: "Two lonely soles who ...

Hello GreenTulip! I really like it! It's not quite a poem, it's like a letter. I found something that could be an error, but I'm not sure. "Knowing nothing will ...

Hello IamTraunt! This is kind of funny, the usual comic book save-the-reporter, and then her opinion on him, and all, it's hilarious. This might be how I felt if a ...

Hello TheWeather! This is beautiful! short, sweet, and beautiful. My favorite part is: "we were out of touch with reality, and soon enough became out of touch with each other. ...

Hello ABarros! Looks like this might be your first published work on here, and it's excellent! I can imagine it as a song, I like how you transition, in such ...

Hello Pinkieshere1345, I really like this song/poem. I try to imagine what tune it would go to, there are so many possibilities. This poem seeps like it means a lot, ...

Hello ConfusedGlasses! I can't wait for the next chapter! The suspense grows every chapter! I found two typos, you just forgot some letters. "lived o tell the tale." lived to ...

Hello Percybeth, This poem holds so much emotion, it makes me want to cry. In a way, that's a good thing. Emotion is something I look for in writing, you ...