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Kelpies

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Ten

    I would keep reading right now, but at this present date I can't. Keep going! I love it! And they escaped before they were even tested. Hawkschreech, his dream is ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Eight

    OMGlob! I love it, the suspense is still building! How will the other strays get on without both of the leaders? None of them know where to go! Will they ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows, Chapter Five

    I need to read the rest! The suspense in every chapter catches me off guard. I love a good thriller/fantastical story. It just gets better and better. I also love ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Four

    The action grows more and more intense! First no strays go, then they all go, and their leader is turned against them! I can't predict what is going to happen ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the secret garden

    I liked how you included stuff about the modern world, and yet it is a little fantastical. But I see the symbolism of the garden, the garden is our mind. ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Three

    ooh, twist ending! I thought that at least one cat would stay. So now some cats are going to die and after that they will believe them. Right? Just a ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: A World of Fears; Prologue

    The suspense! What is Doomsday? Why is everything taken from you? I love it! Written as a work of art. I can't wait for the rest of the book! I ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: The Last Stretch

    Awesome! The way you write about the Warpers gives me the chills. I love how you described the collar and the way your rescuer saves you. I want to know ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter One

    I assumed that it was inspired by Warriors, but it is even better! And that is a major complement coming from me, a extreme cat/warriors fan. I love that you ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Close Your Eyes

    Very intriguing, I loved it so much that I starred it. You should keep going, there are only so many great writers in the world, and this is an example ...

    Apr 29, 2014


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