Kelly-Vision

This was really effective. It showed exactly how bad some people's lives can be, and how they view it. I would really like to read the rest of this story!

Wow this was so deep.. I really loved this. It was so personal and I feel the readers can relate to it and empathise with it. It shows the inner ...

I absolutely loved it, I'm a big fan of twilight and I thought that was better- it should be in one of the scary movies XD I LOVED IT! I ...

Thank You (Y) Much Appreciated :D

Haha Thank You :D I actually wrote that a while ago, and fortunatly I'm over the guy and all now! Thankfully though, we still remaine friends to this day, though ...

Haha :D Thank You ^^ But I'm over the guy and all now :P I Wrote that a little while ago, we are still friends though which is good :wink: ...

I Really Liked This ^^ Structure is fantastic. Vocab. is brill. Nothing Bad To Say At All!^^ x

Thank You, I have noted your comments and I will consider your options. I do have a twist for this story, its not going to be your average love story, ...