Kelcia

First off: Props for Greek Myths! I love the way you used Psyche's point of view: You're right, Greek myths are very masculine. I have never thought about the story ...

Now, right off the bat, that was a cool opening! It grabbed my attention, and sucked me into the story. It truly gives an interesting insight into a trained killer's ...

I say amen to that, sister! It's true! YWS is the only site that offers concrete reviews, as far as I know. I mean, I know that there are some ...

Just wanted to say, I absolutely adore this. The idea of someone being able to see ghosts isn't a new one, but you pull it off brilliantly. I like the ...

That's so cute. A little corny, as you said yourself, but, hey, aren't most romance stories? One nitpick - "The door creaked open and slammed shut despite Andrew's telepathic warnings." ...

You know? I actually think that what you wrote here is better writing than in the original Twilight novels. A couple of things, though. Edwards and mines home." That's just ...

Oh, geez Irish... Now I've gone all teary. :') Your imagery is beautiful, but your descriptions can get slightly repetitive, although not that much to complain about. To be honest, ...

Major. Score. :D Awesome! All I have to say. Well, no, actually. Stripy socks with THAT outfit? and socks in sand... lol, not my thing. ;) Great, keep it up!

I enjoyed that - a very interesting idea. You need to watch your punctuation, and some parts could do with a few touch-ups, but besides that, your story is pretty ...

The story telling was my favorite part! I like the idea of a black wolf; it's original, and makes the reader want to know more. One thing I noticed, and ...

Very nice. I enjoyed all the details - the discriptions of her riding especially. I have a couple suggestions, though. In the beginning, when she's getting ready to ride Gira ...

Hi! I like the first bit - about the man and the mirror. It adds some mystery to the whole thing. I have a few suggestions, though. He tries to ...

Hiya! This is very good. Second person stories are hard to pull off, but you managed this one pretty well. I think, if you switched into first or third person, ...

Well, I like the mood of this piece. It seems like it could be used very powerfully. However, your punctuation is rather lacking. Capitalize all your 'I's and the first ...

Aw, this is such a sad poem! (and I have four kitties of my own!) It's very moving to a fellow cat lover. Anyway, it's well written, but I think ...