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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Writer's Block

    Short but to the point. Got the message across accurately and quite fast. A relatable topic used by many but expressed differently by all. I don't have a whole lot ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Morning Already?

    That. Was. Good. Really. Good. Very relatable, and had a touch of humor.I liked how you took a common occurrence and made it into a comical poem. It was was ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Ship and the Storm

    I'm speechless. Good thing I'm typing this. That was amazing. It was wonderful. Your ability to rhyme is something else. Really. Please write more poems like this. -Kazuto Kirigaya

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Let her go

    I made a grammatical error. This is the corrected comment. This was good. Quite interesting choice of topic. I loved most of this story. I feel the language kind of ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Last Minute Gifts

    Hey! I loved it. I really liked how this couple was gay. I feel that too many stories nowadays focus on straight couples and kind of gives all other types ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Grave Memories

    Wow, deep. That was superb writing. I enjoyed how you left the reader with questions, and only answered some by the end of this story. If you ever turned this ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: internal problems

    That was great! I really liked it, though some parts left me confused. But I could tell, even without the title, what the poem was about. I feel like the ...

    Dec 28, 2015


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind