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Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For
Hey, thanks for the review! It's little gestures like these that keep me writing kek
Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:22 pm -
Re: Praise the Lord
yay a short one Hello there, just passing by for a short review for your equally short story. The issue I have with this story is that it's actually pretty ...
Tue Mar 07, 2017 7:50 am -
Re: Anointing of the Sick
Since this is an excerpt from a sermon, it would defeat the purpose if I didn't explain it here and now. The hypocrisy part lies in how the official as ...
Mon Mar 06, 2017 12:12 pm -
Re: Anointing of the Sick
it's no problem, I don't mind it too much lol
Sun Mar 05, 2017 5:13 am -
Re: Anointing of the Sick
Oh, there's a double meaning when I said "cast away." Try making the connections with the other parts of the story. Thanks for your review though, really appreciate it. At ...
Sat Mar 04, 2017 11:19 am -
Re: She Is
one question: is this autobiographical?
Sun Feb 26, 2017 5:12 am -
Re: Hollow
cringey is subjective
Sun Feb 26, 2017 4:48 am -
Re: Death Note of the Philippines
Well, when you write a name on the Death Note, they die (check my comment below). I suppose we can say these guys are dead. For the question of who ...
Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:34 am -
Re: I "love" Science
This one's actually inspired by a Cyanide and Happiness comic made by Kris Wilson. I think I memorized its script at this point. "You don't love science. You're just looking ...
Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:15 am -
Re: Death Note of the Philippines
Ayyy I actually tried to make a statement there. So many people died. I checked the news last January or December, the survival rate was pretty much zero. These guys ...
Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:07 am -
Re: Death Note of the Philippines
“High school student and prodigy Light Yagami stumbles upon the Death Note and—since he deplores the state of the world—tests the deadly notebook by writing a criminal's name in it. ...
Fri Feb 17, 2017 3:57 pm -
Re: I "love" Science
A little challenge for the reviewers: Try and find out the message I'm trying to get across through this flashfic.
Tue Feb 14, 2017 2:50 pm -
Re: Suicide Smiles
Quite interesting, but it breaks the golden rule of storytelling on a consistent basis. Creepypasta?
Sun Feb 12, 2017 9:01 am -
Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans
alright that is rather insightful
Tue Feb 07, 2017 2:13 pm -
Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans
*dudette*
Mon Feb 06, 2017 12:40 pm
