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Kazumi

  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    Hey, thanks for the review! It's little gestures like these that keep me writing kek

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Praise the Lord

    yay a short one Hello there, just passing by for a short review for your equally short story. The issue I have with this story is that it's actually pretty ...

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    Since this is an excerpt from a sermon, it would defeat the purpose if I didn't explain it here and now. The hypocrisy part lies in how the official as ...

    Mar 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    it's no problem, I don't mind it too much lol

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    Oh, there's a double meaning when I said "cast away." Try making the connections with the other parts of the story. Thanks for your review though, really appreciate it. At ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: She Is

    one question: is this autobiographical?

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Hollow

    cringey is subjective

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    Well, when you write a name on the Death Note, they die (check my comment below). I suppose we can say these guys are dead. For the question of who ...

    Feb 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Science, Realistic Re: I "love" Science

    This one's actually inspired by a Cyanide and Happiness comic made by Kris Wilson. I think I memorized its script at this point. "You don't love science. You're just looking ...

    Feb 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    Ayyy I actually tried to make a statement there. So many people died. I checked the news last January or December, the survival rate was pretty much zero. These guys ...

    Feb 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    “High school student and prodigy Light Yagami stumbles upon the Death Note and—since he deplores the state of the world—tests the deadly notebook by writing a criminal's name in it. ...

    Feb 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Science, Realistic Re: I "love" Science

    A little challenge for the reviewers: Try and find out the message I'm trying to get across through this flashfic.

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Literature Re: Suicide Smiles

    Quite interesting, but it breaks the golden rule of storytelling on a consistent basis. Creepypasta?

    Feb 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans

    alright that is rather insightful

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans

    *dudette*

    Feb 6, 2017


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