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Kazumi

  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    Hey, thanks for the review! It's little gestures like these that keep me writing kek

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:22 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Praise the Lord

    yay a short one Hello there, just passing by for a short review for your equally short story. The issue I have with this story is that it's actually pretty ...

    Tue Mar 07, 2017 7:50 am
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    Since this is an excerpt from a sermon, it would defeat the purpose if I didn't explain it here and now. The hypocrisy part lies in how the official as ...

    Mon Mar 06, 2017 12:12 pm
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    it's no problem, I don't mind it too much lol

    Sun Mar 05, 2017 5:13 am
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    Oh, there's a double meaning when I said "cast away." Try making the connections with the other parts of the story. Thanks for your review though, really appreciate it. At ...

    Sat Mar 04, 2017 11:19 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: She Is

    one question: is this autobiographical?

    Sun Feb 26, 2017 5:12 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Hollow

    cringey is subjective

    Sun Feb 26, 2017 4:48 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    Well, when you write a name on the Death Note, they die (check my comment below). I suppose we can say these guys are dead. For the question of who ...

    Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:34 am
  • Short Story » Science, Realistic Re: I "love" Science

    This one's actually inspired by a Cyanide and Happiness comic made by Kris Wilson. I think I memorized its script at this point. "You don't love science. You're just looking ...

    Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:15 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    Ayyy I actually tried to make a statement there. So many people died. I checked the news last January or December, the survival rate was pretty much zero. These guys ...

    Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:07 am
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    “High school student and prodigy Light Yagami stumbles upon the Death Note and—since he deplores the state of the world—tests the deadly notebook by writing a criminal's name in it. ...

    Fri Feb 17, 2017 3:57 pm
  • Short Story » Science, Realistic Re: I "love" Science

    A little challenge for the reviewers: Try and find out the message I'm trying to get across through this flashfic.

    Tue Feb 14, 2017 2:50 pm
  • Short Story » Horror, Literature Re: Suicide Smiles

    Quite interesting, but it breaks the golden rule of storytelling on a consistent basis. Creepypasta?

    Sun Feb 12, 2017 9:01 am
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans

    alright that is rather insightful

    Tue Feb 07, 2017 2:13 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Humans Who Hate Looking At Other Humans

    *dudette*

    Mon Feb 06, 2017 12:40 pm


Nothing is impossible, for the word itself says, 'I'm possible!'
— Audrey Hepburn