Kazumi

Oh shoot, I should have considered that. I mean the process behind this poem. Darn, shoulda seen that.

Hmmm, maybe I can wait for the next parts, then write a review for those next parts and then edit them into this comment? Or maybe I can write a ...

Oh no, I screwed up. This wasn't supposed to be a review, just a comment. I'm trying to get it fixed already though, don't worry.

I like the name of your main character mainly because it sounds like Khaled. DJ Khaled. Yes. It is he, the man, the myth, the meme . *insert audio of ...

cool moves, ella. this was sharp as fricc

Gosh darn, don't be so hard on yourself lol. There ain't no pressure to be perfect, especially on the first works. Also, I think it would be better if you ...

what in the what this is the first yws poem I've willingly read in a long time and it's getting strange already lol I'm more of a strawberry guy, but ...

wait, wait, wait, hold up. I think I read a poem of the same title by the same author a year back, but I just can't put a finger to ...

sugoooooooiii desu yo~~~

I'm in the middle of something right now, but thanks for the review. I'm sorry I couldn't make a more detailed response. I'm glad that you finally took this out ...

I'm in the middle of something right now, so I can't make a more proper response, but highkey thanks for the review. I appreciate that this finally got out of ...

Hot diggity. It's alright, even if you didn't get in too deep. Thanks to you, I know better what I should do in the next iteration of this essay. Yes, ...

Hot diggity, how'd you stuble upon this old boy? Anyways, thanks for the input. It'd be extra dope if you pointed out where these errors were specifically to make my ...

No problem

Aley, highkey thanks for taking the time to cook up this long review for all of these poems. And don't worry, I'll make sure it gets to them.