Kazeybear

This is so sweet! I won't really critique it as it was was written by someone so young, but well done Kanome's sister. You wrote a good poem! I don't ...

Thanks for your comment Rose!

Thanks for your review Belle! I hope you like the changes I've made based on your suggestions. ~Kazey

Hi comrie! Thank you for your your review. I'll be sure to incorporate the change you specified. Thanks again. ~Kazey

Thanks for your review! I understand exactly what you mean about the rhyming pattern. I often don't change the pattern, but I felt like changing it up a little. I ...