Kaylyn

I didn't like the fourth book as well as the first three. I'm not sayong that is wasn't good though.

Our teacher went over the symbolosim in it. Like for example when the boys are killing and torturing the sow, it has been studied and argued that the boys were ...

Thanks a hundred and one times Fellow! I love those kind of reviews. It really helps me out and I'm glad you took the time to read and review this. ...

Ewww, I hate Lord of the Flies! It is the most awful book ever.

Ahhhh, sorry. It wont be that way for long. promise. :) Its just easier to have one instead of two parents I guess. I'll probaby end up fixing it along ...

It sn't exact;y a fairytale ending. They don't get back togather. Well, thanks for the crit on everything Galerius. It was a bit helpful. I know that its a angst ...

Galerius: last lines are good, i like how you seperated "forever" with the rest of the poem. *gasps* Was that actually a complement? *Looks outside* THE WORLDS COMING TO AN ...

You need some major punctuation. You need to divide up the lines.

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I like the idea, but it sounds a little like the Giver. Have you ever read it? Its really good. Just stay away from that. Great idea by the way, ...

OMG! That was hilarious. Everyone was looking at me like I was crazy. *sniffs* you just HAD to make fun of Bella. You could so make a career out of ...

Courtney, slow down on the smilies! :) So many.... Thanks for letting me know how you feel about it... *sniffle* JK

*edited* Demeter: Those lines mean that I am smart enough to know that you don't mean it. But thanks, sometimes when I read it I don't catch those things. Thanks! ...

Wow, long post. You really need to post this in sections. Shorter ones. The length will depress anyone who tries to read it. Thsi could have been made into two ...

Thanks, I'll edit it. I see your meaning. As for cliffhangers...well, i love to write them but I hate to read them. lol. AS for came to...its a term I ...