Kaylyn

I want to know what happens to dustfinger and meggie and Resa so bAD. I wonder whats going to happen between the ttwo. I think that Inkdeath had already been ...

Hmmm, sounds intersting. I'll have to read it. Have you read the historian? It is a good fantasy book too.

Yeah, I read it in 7th grade. I liked it pretty well.

Thanks for all the critiques as I continue through the story.

Wow, cruel and ironically funny at the end. Right now I am short on time but I will review your chapter in detail when I get home. I found it ...

thanks for the critique, BUT ITS NOTHING LIKE TWILIGHT!! Sorry.. a bit sensitive about that...

Amazing! One of my friends also wrote on the sound of music. I liked the flow of your poem. But of course eberyone had different opinions... Keep up the poetry. ...

Thanks for all the critique.

Loved your poem. so envoius. i wish i could write poetry that good-i cant.

Its capitalized at every line because of the autocorrect, sorry I can't change it. And I am not trying to get a message out, it is just about me so ...

Thanks, I guess you're right. I'll think of something to add...

Thanks.... I edited it now. So is it any better?

I can not tell you how boring it gets being Death You need a period at the end of this sentance. No one EVER just calls you to say "Hi". ...

I didn't see any major grammar mistakes in this poem, so good job there. I loved the poem, it flowed nicely. Good work. It had a nice rhyming scene and ...

Break this up, if you don't want it critiqued then why'd ya post it? Put it in lines. Fix the grammar. Sorry I couldn't resist.