Kaylyn

Thanks for all the critiques. ~ Prologue ~ Venders shouted their wares and bargains as Caolyn walked through the market, her golden hair glinting against the bright sunlight. She used ...

~ Chapter One ~ The leaves crunched under her feet as she ran joyfully though the Forests of Raiyne. The girl had lived there her entire life. She passed the ...

There is a prologue and chapter one prior to this. If you read chapter one, well you might want to go back and reread it. I changes it alot, and ...

~ Chapter Three ~ “You’re… you’re the Warrior Queen,” Fallyn sputtered nervously. All thoughts of not showing weakness was all gone now. The floorboards creaked as Fallyn shifted her wait ...

~ Chapter Four ~ Fallyn came through the other side of the Looking Glass. Glancing down she discovered that she still held it. Unusual sounds caught her ears, it sounded ...

~ Chapter Five ~ Raiyne led Fallyn towards the sunrise; the sky a blaze of colors. The multicolored leaves crunched under her feet, and the breeze blew softly through the ...

~ Chapter Six ~ When Fallyn came to her senses, she thought her eyes were still closed. She blinked and realized that she was awake. There was no light, not ...