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Re: The Night Beside The Pond
I think I can see where I've gone wrong, thanks for the comments. Yes, I was writing from experience, and I just ended up telling an account of what happened, ...
Nov 8, 2005 -
Re: Remnants of You
I really enjoyed this poem! It flowed nicely and nothing seemed forced. Great topic too! Haven't read a poem about smoking before, makes a very refreshing change.
Nov 7, 2005 -
Re: Jesus Was Gother Than You.
It was the title that made me read it too, lol. I thought this was a really good piece of work. You definitely conveyed your emotions well, and you could ...
Nov 7, 2005 -
Re: two is an odd number
Wow! I really enjoyed this. It flows nicely and seems effortless! Well done xx
Oct 20, 2005