KayLou1609

Hi there! Here to leave a review! Grammar 1) "and we'd had a hard days work beforehad" - should be "and we'd had a hard day's work beforehand" 2) "So ...

Hi there! First of all, I really like how the poem is set out. The way you start each stanza with a different age, and gradually increase the ages from ...

Hi there! I absolutely love the similes and metaphors you've used to emphasise your points made as it paints a brighter picture for the reader and adds to the really ...

Short and sweet! Although there is very little imagery used, it allows the reader to create their interpretation of the poem, and it also avoids the 'telling instead of showing' ...

This is really good! I love the imagery and the language you've used to create such an emotional poem. The limited word count per line is a well-chosen decision as ...

This is a really good poem. I love how you've chosen such an original theme and the language you've used has painted a large picture in such a few lexical ...