KayKayKoala

This is really good! I just love the way that the words flow I love the rhythm of it My favorite lines are "In the midst of a storm, I ...

This was quite wonderful to read! I loved the way it flowed, and it seemed to have real meaning It sounds personal It wasn't just words on a screen, it ...

This is good. :) Maybe, you can make it longer though Poems can be any length, of course. And I understand if you intended for this to be short I ...

I definitely think it is a good start. It has something there, considering it is personal. It has a meaning. One thing I would improve on, is that it's maybe ...