KayB

Thank you. :)

I'm aware of how boxy the shapes are, and I'm particularly bothered by the the shape of their bodies in the 2nd panel and how long I made Oleander's legs. ...

I new here so I don't really understand what you mean by art thread, but thank you. :)

Thank you, I'll keep this in mind. :D

Well, even if I leave the same review doesn't mean that I don't mean it. Everyone needs the encouragement. :D

As true as your comment may be, This is very well written.

Thank you, this will help me a lot in the future! I am aware of how painfully undescriptive it is, but this is more of a rough, semi finished draft ...

Amazing and well written. It gave me a homey feeling, reminding me of my farm like lifestyle. Sounds like an amazing place, I wish we had something like that around ...

Awesome.