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Re: Old, Yet New
I love the rhythm in this poem its just so easy to read and I love the use of questions, make you think and actually wonder whats behind it, you ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Conquered
Very dark but aren't we all a bit at times, it's beautiful and I love the emotion you show and how honest you are!! My lips are bleeding,My brain is ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Nerd
Haaa I LOVE IT :D that really made me smile i have braces and do happen to miss school :P
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: My Confession
Emm good :) very empowering, not what i expected when I started reading it, makes me wanna get up and do something :P good job! Maybe a bit too long ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
Very long but fantastic, very powerfull! I think the short lines work, really made it intense. I love ''I feel your presence Like you were never gone'' good writing :)
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Corporate Earth
Thats actually amazing, good job very good writting :) I read it to the tune of every teardrops a waterfall, good job :)
Jul 27, 2011
