Katlyn67

I really liked this piece. I thought you were very precise and accurate with your language and I la-la-loved the end paragraph. A question I have on my mind, which ...

I really liked these poems. I particularly liked the first one, and I thought you had very clever imagery. You also had a good sense of rhythm and flow throughout, ...

Hi there :) I really liked this piece. I liked the flow of it and the imagery was amazing. I especially loved the oxymoron of your title. For me however, ...

Hey there :) I love the imagery you have used. I like the idea of your piece, it's really nice to see it a bit more to read than previous ...

Chapter 1...and a prologue too? I think they should be separate personally. I found the prologue maybe a bit too short for my liking. I would have loved to know ...

Hey there! I didn't enjoy this one as much as your last ones. I guess because it didn;t have the bang that the first chapter had. I also found the ...

This was a sweet poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love how you strucutred it and it had a great flow to it, even if the second line of the ...

What's the thing about? Anyway, great poem! I loved the way you expressed yoursefl throughout, it was astonishing! I also loved how you used the image of darkness throughout. Talk ...

I really, really, really, really, really, really liked this! This was great! You have SUCH a great way of expressing your words, I loved it! I have to say though, ...