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Re: Bed, Pure
Why hello there, i'll be reviewing your poem today. This poem is well written and thought out very well. It took me a time or two to understand it completely. ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: This Sky Will Betray You
I usually don't read such long poetry. This one was quite different fromwhat i've read. I liked the stregnth in this poem. It's point is very strong, along with your ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Line Of Fate
Alrightyyy(: So this was a very well thought poem. Flow was good. But there are a few spots in need of correction: First stanza: "Walking down the line What's gonna ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: From Dreams To Reality - A love poem
Kasidie Clyde here
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: City Lights Come Crashing Down
This very well written. Good flow, a few grammatical mistakes, a few lines missing words. The normal typo's. Otherwise. This is a bittersweet poem. Nice to read, well written, seems ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Hands
This may be just my opinion, some may share it with me, but a lot of this didn't flow for me. Maybe i read it wrong. Or maybe you wrote ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: What Thou Art Sees in Me
In using Olde English, you must know how to. Or your poem will seem ignorant. This poem is sweet, and to the point, yet so not original. You need to ...
Jan 18, 2011