Karzkin

When I first saw this I was like "how was my crappy poem featured and this one not?!" but justice has been done. Luuuuuurves it/you

A pleasure.

Thanks for the review.

The caged bird sings of freedom.

Why should I capitalise the title? The past tense of 'hang' (with a noose) is in fact 'hanged'. The line-breaks are anything but random, the short lines are short for ...

Thanks for the review. All the 'characters' except Thomas are intentionally left underdeveloped. Why? Figure it out. Good work on picking up the tea. Like BadNarrator said, it IS a ...

You missed the point a little XD Thomas is the one who dies at the end. Thanks for the review though.

Oh you flatterer. Karz did very little. This is nice.

Oh man, you submitted. Nice. Sorry I haven't been able to look at this with you recently, life's been getting in the way. I'm still not sold on the repetition ...

Hahaha thanks. I've actually performed it a few times with my saxophone since I wrote it.

"I'm Persy and I'm no good at poetry rah rah rah woe is me, the poem I knocked out in 5 minutes has more likes than the one Karz spent ...

Google it ;)

Thanks to Persy for all her help refining it.

Thanks. I'll think about the comma after crisp. The thunder quote has to stay as it is though, because it's a direct quote. Google it ;)

Thank you, Green Knight.