Karzkin

Hi :) Sorry it's been so long. I've been terribly busy. I must admit, I'm not a fan. The problem is you have not given the reader anything at all ...

Hmm I'm not sure your editions do anything for it. It still has the same problems the first draft did.

Hello Cadox. Sorry it's been so long. This one is hit and miss I think. For me, it's the sudden changes between 'inside' and 'outside' (I mean, in terms of ...

Hey pal. You and I have already been over this one in depth, so I'll keep this brief and try not to repeat myself. First, the title. I agree with ...

Hero, I'm finally here. Sorry it's taken so long. You know man, I'm really ambivalent about this one. I just can't decide. I like it, I don't like it, it's ...

Hey! Sorry it's been so long. I'm here. This is nice. Really nice. I am still drooling over your description of the watermelon. Ryds has already given an in-depth technical ...

Rainn, I haven't seen you around much. Good to see you here. I won't lie, I'm not a fan of this. Why? Because there really isn't much here. There is ...

Captain! I'm here. Sorry it's been so long, life and stuff. I like this. I mean, I really bloody like this. This piece is a study in construction. The development ...

Audster! First, Metamorphosis references! Yeah! Ten points! Existentialism five! Listen, you and I both know what you're doing. You know what's up, you've been around the traps. This piece is ...

Nope, not digging it. In fact, I am not sure if I would even call it a poem. It's just a series of sentences. There are a number of problems ...

Oooooh man. Here we go. I won't lie, I did not like this. Not one bit. There is nothing here that can be described as "good poetry". Everything wrong with ...

Hello. I don't think we've met. I'm Mr. K. Anyways, poem. Not going to lie, I don't like it. All we really have here is a relatively simple narrative. No ...

Nia, dearest Nia. Hai c: Let's get to it. I drink the leavings of my watercolors Ew. I hope you brush your teeth afterwards. Kidding! It's lovely. You have a ...

Walker! First, the title. Have you tried mashing your palms against the keyboard? Apparently that's what Kamas does when she's stuck for a title. Now, poem. It could improve (I ...

Here, finally! (Sorry it's been so long, had to saxophone.) This is quite brill. I agree with most of what Walker said. She's right, one of your greatest strengths is ...